New Grad找全职简历，求狠批回复加米

New Grad秋招马上开始了，刚刚花了好几天的时间修改了简历，链接如下：https://drive.google.com/file/d/ ... zm/view?usp=sharing

希望大家能够从各个角度评价一下还有哪些可以修改的地方？非常感谢！回复一定加米！

i am a hiring manager. it is not bad but i'd call out issues i saw. personal opinion only.

1. you're graduating in may 2021 and you're actively looking for a fulltime position? most companies prefer hiring someone who can join asap (or within 3 months). i'd recommend you call out your earliest start date.
2. most people spent <7 seconds on a resume. to my personal taste, there is TMI on one page. cut to 80% of the content & focus on the key messages you'd like to convey. what's one strength you'd like them to see?
3. for a new grad with a master's, i feel like you listed too many technology terms. maybe it'll help with filters in automated systems (and perhaps recruiters who ctrl+f some keywords on a resume), but to me it feels like you are listing any framework you have touched.
4. master-slave bluh bluh. with some googling you should be able to find why this term is controversial recently. own your risk if you'd like to keep the term on the resume.
5. i didn't read pass the 1st internship (and I've already spent 3x the amount of time i'd normally spend on a resume).  
6. some good quality of code in your github page outweigh the whole page of text.

good luck!

2006kybs 发表于 2020-07-25 19:25:22
那对于我所描述的这种对并发和JVM的了解情况能往上面写吗？其实我就是对一些并发中经典问题，比如Monitor管程、JMM、CAS无锁并发、各种原子类、JUC常见并发容器集合、AQS原理、线程池实现之类

其实有一点.....你又不是有10年工作经验，怎么可能对于底层那么熟悉....

你作为一个new graduate, skill 太多不是好事，容易被问出问题，除非你能保证，放在简历上的skills，比如你说的JVM之类的，没人能问倒你，否则不建议放那么多。不是说你造假，而是你的简历skill那里有点浮夸....并发和JVM坑很大，一问一个懵。


当然，你要是大神，当我没说

真的可以，看起来很好。算是近期看到不错的

虽然能感觉到楼主对系统并发以及对JVM理解的强大信心，但如果只是找个普通SDE工作，什么Lock，Monitor，Thread Pool之类的放上去对HR来说没太大意义, 一个 Java(Proficient) 放在那里说服力就足够了。那些细节原理性的东西可以在面试当中和面试官讨论，当然前提是面试官对这些东西也有兴趣。

当然或许楼主就是想做研究JVM，Distributed Database Transaction之类的方面的工作，那我建议再准备一份简历，只详细写这些东西。什么Web service，HTML之类的东西就不要提了。

alicealicemm 发表于 2020-7-25 14:12
i am a hiring manager. it is not bad but i'd call out issues i saw. personal opinion only.

1. you ...

非常感谢这些详细有价值的建议，另外可以具体说一下我的第一段实习经历为什么读不懂嘛？我重新看了一下感觉第二个bullet point读起来确实相当绕…

Sezedai 发表于 2020-7-25 14:20
虽然能感觉到楼主对系统并发以及对JVM理解的强大信心，但如果只是找个普通SDE工作，什么Lock，Monitor，Thr ...

哎主要是国内的面试也在准备，了解到国内对并发多线程和JVM相关的内容很热衷考察，所以花了挺长时间去学这些的；其实我是想做Java后端的相关内容，对前端确实不怎么感兴趣，学习内容的话也就是后端相关框架、分布式系统设计之类的，不知道这种准备思路在美国行不行得通…

令人印象深刻的简历

我知道我为什么找工作那么难了😷

感觉内容太多了，看着有点累

rwlives 发表于 2020-7-25 15:50
我知道我为什么找工作那么难了😷

其实也没有了-_-大部分都是经过包装过了的，好多东西都是后续自学然后放上去的，实习本身都满水的