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本帖最后由 q198800287 于 2013-9-5 14:49 编辑

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past.

Health is quiet important for us, as it almost the foundamental of all the activities, then when it comes to maintaining good healthy, some people believe nowadays' good medical condition could contribete to a better body condition, however, I am prone to deem that in the past, people are easier to maintain good health.

First of all, in the past, the pollution is not as  serious as today. With the boom of technolegy, a variety of environmental challenges, such as, acid rain, ozon depletion, greenhouse effect,have been presented infront us.How could we be more healthy at a circumstance like this? These issues are, ademittly, dangerous to us.A example which can aptly illustrate this point would be the skin disease caused by violant-rax. Since the ozon deplation is geting more and more serious, more virolent-rax could contact skin ,as a consequence, people may have a skin cancer.So in the past people could not suffer from this case.

Furthermore, the work in the past are not as firce as today. Nowadays the pressure out of society are increasing, as a consequence, people have to work harder to get the same amount of wealth as it was in the past, we have to get up early and stay up  until we finish the work, even, some people have to pull after the time they eat lunch or dinner.So I think poeple in the past could matain good health in a more relax atmosphere.

Last but not least, the unusual climate of the planet could make us difficult to keep good health. Since the unpredicable and extreme climate have beening occuring in recent years, many people cannot adjust such climate and get sick which could make us vulnerable, and disturb our normal life, let alone keeping health.

To sum up, on the basis of the above analysis, we can safely conclude that nowadays people are harder to maintain good health than people in the past.

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Health is quiet important for us, as it almost the foundamental fundamental of all the activities, then when it comes to maintaining good healthy, some people believe nowadays' good medical condition could contribete to a better body condition, however, I am prone to deem that in the past, people are easier to maintain good health.

First of all, in the past, the pollution in the past was is not as large serious as today. With the boom of technolegy, a variety of environmental challenges, such as, acid rain, ozon deplation, greenhouse effect,have been presented in front us. How could we be more healthy at a circumstance like this? These issues are, ademittly admittedly应该是obviously吧), dangerous to us. A An example which can aptly illustrate this point would be the skin disease caused by violant-rax. Since the ozon deplation is geting more and more serious, more virolent-rax could contact skin, as a consequence, people may have a skin cancer. So in the past people could not suffer from this case.

Furthermore, the work in the past are not as firce as today. Nowadays the pressure out of society are increasing, as a consequence, people have to work harder to get the same amount of wealth as it was in the past, we have to get up early and stay up  until we finish have finished the work, even, some people have to pull after the time they eat lunch or dinner.So I think poeple in the past could matain maintain good health in a more relax atmosphere.

Last but not least, the unusual climate of the planet could make us difficult to keep good health. Since the unpredicable and extreme climate have beening is occuring in recent years, many people cannot adjust such climate and get sick which could make us vulnerable, and disturb our normal life, let alone keeping health.

To sum up, on the basis of the above analysis, we can safely conclude that nowadays people are harder to maintain good health than people in the past.

总体不错,小错误较多需要注意
hdchina2010
2013-09-03

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