11月9日鸡精people can make friends with guy who has more money

People can make friends with guy who has more money
观点一：People are more likely to get financial support from rich friends with they are in trouble.
观点二：Many people have more money because they work harder, so they are good example from whom we can learn a lot.
想用一边倒的结构，结果再想不出第三个观点了……所以只写了两个，字数差不多，分享一下。
这次花了50分钟……比上次有点进步。

-baidu 1point3acresIt is inevitable that some people in the world are much richer that the others. Of course, many differences exist between people who hold different amount of wealth. But the question is that should these people get along and hang out with each other? In other words, can we make friends with guy who has more money? I think it’s not a bad idea to do so, viewing the benefits we will discuss in the following.

To begin with, people are more likely to financial support from rich friends when they are in trouble. We cannot deny the positive affect of those friends who can just give us emotional support and encourage us when we are caught in trouble. However, richer friends, who have more money than us, is usually who get us out of dilemma. For example, if we want to start a business, but we don’t have enough money and loan from the bank is very mean, we are more likely to ask for help from friends who have that money and get investment from them. Therefore, a friend like this is very helpful. In most case money is necessary in our career. With a friend who is richer and accommodating, we have more chance to success.

Secondly, many people have more money because they work harder, so they are good example from whom we can learn a lot. We can see a lot of people who are successful and earn much money. However, we cannot ignore the efforts they put in to achieve their goals. Many merits are necessary for their success, such as courage, reliability, diligence and so forth. All of these are good examples which are worth for us to learn. Let me give an example. My friend Jane is a smart and skillful scientist and work in the world largest software company. She makes hundreds of thousands dollars a year. And her fortune doesn’t come from nowhere. She spent nearly 8 years studying very hard in universities and finally got PhD degree. From her, I know that you may make money from your good looks and smartness, but the most reliable source of wealth is hard working. And I always see her as my model and it is she who encourages me to go further in career.

For above reasons, I definitely support the idea that we can make friends with people who are richer. These friends are helpful, not just because they can give us a hand when we have financial trouble, but also because their experiences are good materials for us to learn.

这题也太与时俱进了吧！！
土豪，我们做朋友吧！

稍微有点疑问，这里的can不应该是指我们“能够”和土豪交上朋友？而是如lz所写的“要”和土豪交朋友？是不是题目本身用should更好？

mymiracle 发表于 2013-11-4 14:43
这题也太与时俱进了吧！！
土豪，我们做朋友吧！

确实是很有建设性的题目，不过跟人觉得“can”也可以是“可以”的意思吧，直接从鸡精上截下来的……

yughjbn007 发表于 2013-11-5 16:40
同学，求11.9日的鸡精，，谢谢！

上午发的邮件，晚上发现被退回来了，后来一直发不过去，不好意思……你直接去网上搜嘛，网上资源很多。

Some people in the world are much richer that the others. And there are many differences between people who hold different amount of wealth. But the question is that should these people get along and hang out with each other? In other words, can we make friends with guy who has more money? I think it’s not a bad idea to do so, viewing the benefits we will discuss in the following.

To begin with, people are more likely to get financial support from rich friends when they are in trouble. We cannot deny the help from friends who can just give us emotional support when we are caught in troubles. However, richer friends is usually who get us out of financial dilemma. Let me give an example. We want to start a business, but don’t have enough money. And loan from the bank is very mean. Then we are more likely to ask for help from friends who have money. It’s more possible for us to get investment from them. In this case, a friend like this is very helpful. Having friends who are richer, we have more chance to success.

Secondly, many people have more money because they work very hard, and they are good examples from whom we can learn a lot. People like this usually have a lot of merits, such as courage, reliability, diligence and so forth. All of these are good examples which are worth for us to learn. My friend Jane is friend like this. She is a smart and skillful scientist and work in largest software company in my country. She makes hundreds of thousands dollars a year. And her fortune doesn’t come from nowhere. She spent nearly 8 years studying very hard in universities and finally got a PhD degree. From her, I know that the most reliable source of wealth is hard working. And I always see her as my model and it is she who encourages me to go further in my career.

For above reasons, I definitely support the idea that we can make friends with people who are richer. These friends are helpful, not just because they can give us a hand when we have financial troubles, but also because they are good examples for us to learn.