【材料专业推荐信】 推荐信这么写行不行啊？到底算不算强推？给意见的都加米！

推荐信如下：

Dear Graduate Admissions Committee,

At the request of Mr. *****, I take great pleasure in recommending him to the prestigious graduate program offered by your department. As the Dean of School of Materials Science and Engineering, ******, I have known **** for more than three years since his enrollment in fall 2016. He is one of the best students in ****** because of his excellence in course studies, professional practices and student activities. Therefore, I accepted his request of recommendation without hesitation and would like to give you an introduction to his merits.

In 2016, **** was admitted by ****** Class, an honor program provided by the School to talented undergraduate students for innovation training. Since his enrollment, his academic record has maintained at the top level, which resulted from his excellent performances in nearly all the professional courses. His major GPA currently ranks the top 3 among those of over 26 students. According to the feedback of his course instructors, ****** has a solid knowledge foundation in materials science and the fundamental sciences like mathematics and physics. Therefore, he is also a frequent prize winner of various professional competitions related to mathematics, physics and English.

Besides course studies, ****** also did a great job in research. He joined ******** research group in early 2018 and participated in two major projects sponsored by the National Nature Science Fund. His performances in both independent research and teamwork were highly evaluated by *****. He also demonstrated excellent practical ability during the summer internship in 2018, which was organized by his department, at an iron and steel manufacturing company.

****** is recommendable for his active participation in student activities as well. Because of his proficiency in English, he shouldered the role of English tutor for the freshmen of ****** and was awarded the title of “Excellent Tutor” by the School. He has good leadership skills. Under his guidance, his class achieved the best score they have ever had in basketball matches. Moreover, he is also an enthusiastic participant of various volunteer activities in and out of the campus. He once worked as a volunteer teacher at a poor rural area in ****** for a whole summer vacation. His participation in public services not only promoted public good but further enhanced his management ability and organizing skills.

To sum up, I would like to draw the conclusion that ****** is an ideal candidate for your program. He has the required academic background, professional competence, and most importantly, motivation and enthusiasm. Please give his application your utmost consideration.

推荐人是院长，也是领域内的大牛。推荐信这么写行不行？算不算强推？有没有必要跟人家说再加一点实际的东西例如综合绩点，文章发表啥的？？？

拜托各位看看了！都加米！

绩点、文章发表等等信息，在你的CV里写的很明白。
绩点绝对没有必要，但文章发表倒是可以顺带提一下，然后重点推荐你的科研能力学术成绩之类的
个人之见

推荐人和你的关系？单纯的认识？给你上过课？你和他做过科研？其实我还没看内容。。有点长

太长了，推荐信一般就是一页以内

太長了吧 而且我覺得老師不會知道這麼細的事情

青鸟 发表于 2019/11/08 21:41:55
绩点、文章发表等等信息，在你的CV里写的很明白。
.google  и绩点绝对没有必要，但文章发表倒是可以顺带提一下，然后重点推荐你的科研能力学术成绩之类的
个人之见

感谢您的意见！

Yukinari 发表于 2019/11/08 20:38:59
太長了吧 而且我覺得老師不會知道這麼細的事情

这个人是院长，因为院比较小，而且我们院的那个精英班就20几个人，所以比较熟，也认识很久了。

lan_lan_lan_lan 发表于 2019/11/08 23:14:27
推荐人和你的关系？单纯的认识？给你上过课？你和他做过科研？其实我还没看内容。。有点长

没，就是上下级关系。但是确实挺熟悉的

读着感觉挺强推了

挺强推的，就是感觉写的好细呀，还提到挺生活化的方面，推荐信不是得有个侧重方向比如科研啊实习啊的这些，挠头

scscsc 发表于 2019/11/19 11:46:57
挺强推的，就是感觉写的好细呀，还提到挺生活化的方面，推荐信不是得有个侧重方向比如科研啊实习啊的这些，挠头

这个是我自己写的。。。。然后科研实习那个另外两封有写，，是每封信都要写科研实习这种的。？？（误